You are in spotlights…The Distracted Pastor, 2019
How did you not see shadow???
You lying rodent…
This senryu was written while waiting for a chance to grab lunch. Hunger has an effect on my sense of humor. It was written in response to Frank Tasson’s Haikai Challenge. The challenge responded to being cold and was presented on the day when the famous shadow forecasting of a particularly coddled groundhog on February 2nd said it would be warm soon. I obviously went with the senryu form, which is obviously not to be taken as a personal insult to the people of Punxsutawney.
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#Haiku Happenings #8: Robert Dean’s latest #senryu for my current #haikai challenge!
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I love your sense of humor! Well done!